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四级考试三层突破之写作四

http://www.yiyingyu.com - 发布时间:2010-04-17 - 所在栏目: 英语作文

(4) 巧妙运用名言警句

名言警句的巧妙运用不仅会使文章有一定的文采,论证更加有说服力,更能显示考生的英语功底。另外能够适时引经据典,必定会让阅卷人眼前一亮。

1) 开头段: 名言警句或俗语谚语等作为文章的开头,既文采斐然,又能突出中心。例如:

just as the saying goes, “ so many people, so many minds”, it is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person to person.to this issue, different people come up with various attitudes.

2) 中间段: 中间段主题句之后引用名言警句,有力证明论点,起到锦上添花的效果。例如:

as a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.computers do play a positive role in the development of people’ lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.we should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.

3) 结尾段: 用名言警句收尾,意在引申文章内涵,充分表明考生自己的观点,极具说服力,收到“言有尽而意无穷”的效果,起到了画龙点睛的作用。例如:

therefore, we should never underestimate our own ability but should believe in the proverb: “where there is a will, there is a way.” confidence is a must for success.

第一部分 写作——特训练习与范文

训练一

directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic college graduates work as village officials. you should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in chinese) below:

1. 你是否认为大学生当村官是个好主意;

   2. 大学生能给乡村提供些什么;

3. 大学生能从村官职位中获得什么。

college graduates work as village officials

训练二

directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic on water shortage. you should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in chinese:

   1. 水资源短缺已成为严重问题;

   2. 造成水资源短缺的原因;

3. 提出解决方案。

on water shortage 答案与解析

训练一

【范文】

college graduates work as village officials

   nowadays many college graduates choose to work as village officials in the remote areas. to this, people’s attitudes differ sharply. some hold the positive view while others are against it. as far as i am concerned, i believe that it is a wise choice.

   above all, college graduates can contribute a lot to the development of the countryside. first, they can apply their professional knowledge there. secondly, they can introduce new concepts to the countryside and speed the development of rural culture. as a result, the gap between the city and the countryside can well be bridged. in addition, these graduates can benefit a lot from working as village officials. while too many college graduates are fighting for the handful of positions in big cities, these graduates can find themselves a wider stage of development and realize their value.

   therefore, college graduates working as village officials is a win-win choice and more graduates should be encouraged to work in the countryside.

点评

文章描述大学生当村官这一现象,并分析其带来的诸多好处。第二段运用 above all, in addition, 引出了两点好处, 在使用 first, secondly 将第一点好处细化,这样使文章 层次清晰。 本文使用了一些精彩的语言,使文章增色不少,例如: contribute a lot to , speed the development , a win-win choice 等等。

训练二

【范文】

on water shortage

   no one can have failed to notice the fact that water shortage is a grave problem with which the whole world is confronted. actually, it has become so widespread that it has severely affected people’s daily life and hindered the development of the global economy.

   a number of factors could account for the problem, but the following might be the critical ones. to begin with, with the development of agriculture and industry, an increasing amount of water is needed. in addition, the ever-increasing population is another leading cause of water shortage. besides, the global tendency of warming up also contributes to the problem. what’s worse, pollution and waste of fresh water aggravate the situation.

   in view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. first, it is essential that laws and regulations be worked out and enforced to protect water resources. secondly, people should enhance their awareness of saving water. with these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to expect a brighter future.

点评

文章以描述人类面临水资源匮乏问题进入主题并且对人们的生活造成影响,逐步引伸到造成水资源匮乏的原因,最后提出解决措施进行展望。文章内容符合提纲要求,并且文章使用 so…that… ; it is essential that + 虚拟语气等句式,以及 account for , ever-increasing , contributes to , in view of 等词汇的使用显示出考生的语言功底。另外,第二段 to begin with, in addition 和第三段 first, secondly 的使用使论述层次清晰。

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