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考试吧:英语写作之让祝贺信锦上添花的细节

http://www.yiyingyu.com - 发布时间:2010-12-09 - 所在栏目: 英语作文
成功的关键在于细节!!无论在国内在国外,各种各样的竞争压力都够大的,见不了几面如何留住别人的眼球甚至是心呢?那就要靠细节!!面试中捡起了一个纸团,好的,这个人够细心,用了!热心帮助了老人拿东西,好的,这个人够有爱心,要了!表现出对公司的无限热爱,好的,这个人够忠心,留了!!……这样的例子太多了。别人不太注意的细节你注意了,那么你就有更多机会成功。

  我们这次在秦苏珊,给我们亲爱的“老詹”老师写的“新婚祝贺信”和办的小party,着实让他小感动了一下呢~~没想到补习班的同学也有这么深的感情~~


  那祝贺信怎么写?贴之~~


  当获悉某人晋升或是在事业上取得巨大成就时,应该打个电话或是写封便签祝贺。这种友好往来对建立和巩固友好的商业合作关系大有益处。


  here are some principles that congratulatory letters follow:


  1. the purpose of writing the letter is to make your reader feel certain that he or she deserves the special message of recognition and praise.


  2. the note should be brief, dealing with the primary topic only. these messages are most effective when they conduct no business.


  3. the whole message should carry a tone of being positive and conversational.


  4. be sure to send the letter within a few days of the event. any delay in delivery of the message would make your effort worse than no effort at all.


  讲过了祝贺信写作应遵循的一些准则,下面我们通过一封信件来看看具体的写作方法。


  dear mr. haskel


  congratulations on your recent promotion to head the marketing department of california metals.


  my fellow managers and i are delighted that your work in the marketing field has been recognized this way and we join in sending you our very best wishes for the future.


  through the five years of working together with you, many of us well aware of how much you've contributed to the association between our two corporations. we are all looking forward to


  your trip to china next month when we will celebrate your advancement in a more formal way.


  again, congratulations to you, mr. haskel - good luck and good wishes on your new position as director of marketing department.


  cordially yours


  (signature)


  lin daming


  marketing director


  beijing new metals


  在这封祝贺信中,写信人一开头就开门见山的祝贺收信者晋升,然后又详细写明自己对对方工作的欣赏、成就的肯定。在信件结尾的部分,写信人用口语化的语气再次祝贺对方的晋升,并以此结束信件。这就是一封祝贺信的范例啦,“煽情”的部分可以自由发挥,但是一定要真情实感,太过夸张地表达也是要不得的哟!!一定要真诚~~否则的话还不如不写,不然会让人觉得另有所图,那就不好了~~


  就是这些啦,漂亮的细节一定会为你锦上添花的~~

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