2010年12月英语六级作文预测及范文(2)

　　part ⅰ writing (30 minutes)

　　directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled a harmonious society in my mind. you should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.

　　1. 建立和谐社会成为了一种潮流和趋势

　　2. 我心中的和谐社会是….

　　3. 为了建立和谐社会，我们应该如何去做?

　　【话题分析】

　　和谐社会是目前中国建设的目标之一，是比较热门的社会话题。报纸、杂志、电视新闻等，经常讨论此话题。考生应多关注社会新闻，为写作收集素材。

　　【范文解析】

　　nowadays, it seems known to everybody that one of the objectives of china's modern construction is to build a harmonious society. all of a sudden, "a harmonious society" has become a frequently-used phrase in media news, newspaper etc. it is the trend of china's development.

　　but what is a harmonious society? in my mind, there are several aspects included in building a harmonious society. first, a harmonious society has democracy in its politics to ensure the maximum benefits of the people. second, a harmonious society has equality and justice to protect the rights of every citizen. third, a harmonious society has good faith and friendly relation between people to create a favorable atmosphere for living and doing business. forth, a harmonious society has energy to make sure its creativity. fifth, a harmonious society has stability and order to provide people with a comfortable environment. sixth, a harmonious society has harmony between humankind and nature for a sustainable development of economy.

　　to be true, it needs joint efforts of every person in china to realize this great goal. for me, i am a student in college. what i can do is develop good relations with people around me, help others as much as possible, spread this awareness to as many people as possible, laying a foundation for this tall building.

　　文章一开始就提到目前中国现代化建设的目标之一，就是构建和谐社会。一时之间，构建社会成为中国发展的趋势。

　　第二段从六个方面讲述了和谐社会的内涵：1)民主政治，保证人们的最大利益;2)公平正义，保证每个公民的权利;3)诚信友好，为生活和生产提供良好环境;4)充满活力，确保社会的创造力;5)稳定有序，保证生活平稳安定;6)人与自然和谐相处，实现经济可持续性发展。

　　第三段从自身出发，讨论在构建和谐社会时自己该如何做。作为一名学生，作者认为：和周围人发展友好关系，乐于助人，传播“和谐社会”的意识，为这个宏伟目标奠定基础。

　　【高分妙招】

　　六级作文很贴近国家大事，因为对时事政治的了解是对当代大学生的要求之一。出现一个新的命题，考生应多关注其内涵及相关评论，这样写作过程中才能做到“胸有成竹”，写出来的作文才“言之有物”。