高校贫困学生

poverty stricken students in colleges

if you study in collegesmhave you ever noticed some students live under financial hardships ⅱ they encounter many difficulties in finishing higher education because they are poverty stricken. their life is hardly known by outsiders——some starve, some seldom buy clothes and still some cannot afford train tickets to return home during vacations.

those impoverished students suffer not only physically but also mentally from their predicament (困境). they worry about tuition (学费) and living expenditure(生活费). some even suffer mental imbalance. after school, many must work part time, which takes away from studies and may make them do poorly or drop out. in spite of this many are very diligent and are prepared to endure all kinds of hardships.

we cannot only sympathize for them. banks should provide them with interest wree loans and all the other social sections man give necessary financial aids. helping these students will enable them to develop abilities and find a suitable career. in the future, well-educated young people will not only improve their own life but will also make our country richer.
范文分析
本文作者用提问开头，醒目抢眼、令人感受心灵震撼。寥寥数语概括出高校贫困生现状，使读者自始至终地随着作者思路，关注其境况。