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小升初英语写作要领之词语简化技巧

http://www.yiyingyu.com - 发布时间:2010-11-16 - 所在栏目: 写作技巧

  策略之一:用介词短语替代从句。例:


  原句:while they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning。


  修改后:during tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning。


  原句:when you come to the second traffic light, turn right。


  修改后:at the second traffic light turn left。


  策略之二:删除诸如"who is”或"that is"之类的关系代词,变从句为短语。例:


  原句:the novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the middle ages。


  修改后:the three-part novel told a story set in the middle ages。


  注:把句中的"three parts"改用形容词来表达,节省了四个不必要的单词"which is written in"。我们经常可以将关系代词如"that"去掉,这只会引起最少的变动。


  策略之三:剔除你不需要的单词。例:


  two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call。


  写完这样的句子后,你自己再读一遍,挑出单词"joint"和"telephone",注意删去不必要的词。

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