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my plan for summer vacation

the longing summer vacation is approaching, it is the best part of the school year for me. i cannot let the holidays elapse (逝去) meaninglessly, my vacation should be a phase (时期、阶段) of harvest. the events in my plan should give me a sense of infinite potential.

the following plan may reveal the intensity of my desire to travel, work and study in this vacation. in the first few days i want to climb mount hua shan with several friends to refresh ourselves. then i tend to visit relatives, senior school teachers and former classmates(老同学). besides, to find out the best ways to cultivate my abilities, i will find a part time job and conduct some social investigation.

in short, i want to do interesting things in the summer vacation. whatever i do, the goal is the same: to get necessary experience, acquire knowledge and broaden my horizons. though the six week vacation will pass away at lightning speed, its influence is bound to last long.
核心剖析
本文作者长句、短句交替使用。文中长句显得容量大，表达了较为复杂完整、严密充实的思想内容。句子开头方式有：“in the first few days”等介词短语作状语开句、“whatever l do"等让步状语从句等句型开句。此外，句子主语除了代词i和it，还使用了多个名词，从而避免了从头到尾一“i”到底。在篇章中通过变化句子长度、句子开头，伞文表达错落有致，语言形式丰富多彩。